Brain storming
Agree
1. 성공하기 위해서는 공부해야 한다. 사회가 경쟁사회가 되면서 job 구하기 어려움, 그래서 놀기보다는 공부를 해야함,repeat
ex) 방학동안에 쉬면서 여행하고 경험을 쌓는 것도 좋지만, 좋은 성적을 갖는 것이 성공하기에 더 유리하다.
2.
The things they should do can be defined as students can study hard. Some people may argue that many people really need to resting time in competitive society. However, I have a different idea. When it comes to the statement that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather than the things they should do, I strongly agree with it.
Many student should study hard more and more rather than wasting time to enjoy their freetime. In other words, because our society is changing to competitive, most of students could not easy get jobs in competitive society. So students who obtained a high score and got a empirical experience on thier's major could find a good job easily than others. For example, my friend Tom just relax on summer vacation last year. Because he just likes playing and relaxing. However, I worked in the company during summer vacation. I got a good experiance in my major and had a chance to meet a competent person. Later, while I got a good job in competitive society, tom did not get a job. Therefore, ~~~~~`